Analyze passages from the narrative texts.
Waking at 7:00 am was unpleasant. On the car journey, I was feeling too sorry for myself for conversation.
The first few days I'd be working with the 'grunts' (officially called 'apprentices'). Most were just months older than me, but judged immediately I'd no skill of any use to them. It turned out the factory owner had only agreed as a favour to Dad. Other guys who'd asked for their kids to work there during school holidays had been refused.
1. By calling the apprentices "grunts", what is the narrator implying about his initial perception of them?
Dad ensured I was kitted out in fetching, lightest-blue overalls. Escorting me, he skirted the factory floor to avoid dirtying his suit, but chatted and seemed to get on with everyone from the grunts to the surliest darkest-blue-overall-clad supervisor.
2. The word "fetching" is used to describe the overalls. What is the effect of this word choice?
Initially, I'd be helping in the coil-winding department by not getting in the way and fetching coffee from the machine. I guessed they chatted more freely when I was on a coffee-fetching run, but I did learn there was discontent amongst the workforce, even talk of strike action. The morning dragged by. Eventually, Dad turned up announcing lunchtime. Usually he took a packed lunch, but our respective lethargy and stress that morning meant the sandwiches were still on the kitchen table at home.
3. The phrase "The morning dragged by" is used to describe the narrator's experience. What does this suggest?
Finally, we reached the holiest place in the entire company, the Accounts Department, occupied by The One with Absolute Power (the clerk who put together the pay packets). Sufficiently important in the company, Dad was granted an audience. I was told to not say anything stupid as we entered the sanctum. The One issued my number, chiding me for not visiting her immediately after I'd arrived and warning of perilous doom awaiting mortals who failed to clock in on time.
4. What is the main effect of the language used to describe the Accounts Department and its clerk (e.g., "holiest place," "Absolute Power," "sanctum")?
People spend hours packing to go fishing, engaged in a kind of military manoeuvre, gear piled strategically and checklists in hand. On the eve of our campaign, I just made sure I'd packed a rod and reel, confident that comrade Royer would have invested heavily in a car-boot full of flashy state-of-the-art equipment as always.
1. What is the effect of describing the packing as a "military manoeuvre" and the trip as a "campaign"?
The sky, unseasonably cloudless and omen-less when we set out, stretched out beyond the suburbs and responsibilities, moving into farming country and onto the highway. The camera lens of life was opening before my eyes, delivering more space and light, exposing an astounding panorama ahead. We coasted through rolling hills, past fragrant wild grasses surfed by the breeze.
2. The metaphor "The camera lens of life was opening before my eyes" primarily suggests that the narrator is feeling:
His yipping got louder as the crumbling road downwards narrowed still further. In minutes, it was scarcely wide enough for one car, much less two should anybody come driving up from below – if anyone ever had survived the drive down. The cliffs were sheer. The phrase 'margin for error' was meaningless. In the end it was too much for him. He froze.
3. What is the effect of the statement "The phrase 'margin for error' was meaningless"?
Now that the day had arrived, his stomach was churning with nerves. Bo wasn't unfit but he'd never hiked alone before. He wondered if successful hikers were city kids like him, more used to traffic than birdsong. He'd read all the advice... But Bo was still scared of all the things that could go wrong: dangerous wild creatures, poisonous plants, a careless slip down a rocky slope and nobody to call for help.
1. The phrase "his stomach was churning with nerves" is a metaphor. What does it effectively convey about Bo's physical and emotional state?
Soon he was surrounded by ancient forest, footsteps muffled by centuries of discarded leaves. Myths of terrifying forest guardians suddenly seemed much more plausible as the endless acres of trees stood watch, stern sentinels of the trail. The silence was spellbinding as Bo crept onwards, down an almost subterranean tunnel of primeval greenery. Forwards, always forwards, an intruder in a magical garden.
2. What is the main effect of describing the trees as "stern sentinels of the trail"?
Was it minutes or hours later? A sharp crack, loud as a gunshot, snapped him to attention. Ears straining, Bo quivered, listening for ravenous forest monsters ready to devour him in one gulp; or maybe a rogue bear or wild boar, hungry for hiker meat? Bo lifted the tent flap and peered into the gaping throat of the darkness, ready to be swallowed.
3. The darkness is described as a "gaping throat... ready to be swallowed." What is the effect of this metaphor?